
In Hemingway’s A Moveable Feast, he describes a snack imbibed on a cold Paris day
that made me travel there after I read it (I was nineteen): “As I ate the
oysters with their strong taste of the sea and their faint metallic taste that
the cold white wine washed away, leaving only the sea taste and the succulent
texture, and as I drank their cold liquid from each shell and washed it down
with the crisp taste of the wine, I lost the empty feeling and began to be
happy and to make plans.”
There are also fine moments of
cooking in literature, such as when Pippi Longstocking makes pancakes for her
friends. She “got out three eggs and tossed them high in the air. One of the
eggs landed on her head and cracked open, making the yolk run into her eyes.
But the other two she easily caught with a saucepan…’I’ve always heard that egg
yolks are good for your hair,’ said Pippi…’Just wait and see, my hair is going
to start growing like mad.’”

Some of my favorite characters are
hungry. Think Dickens and they’ll line up, most notably Pip and Oliver Twist.
Then there’s Stanley Yelnats and Zero in Holes
being so famished and thirsty that they eat raw onions, which saves their
life since it keeps the lethal yellow-spotted lizards away.
As always, there’s some past trauma
lurking. My mom was a terrible cook. She baked steak and put large chunks of
yellow onion in tuna fish. She boiled vegetables until they were soggy and
gray. She even burnt canned soup, then scraped the stuck bit at the bottom into
the bowl. I remember a meal she made where the only edible item were frozen
peas in cream sauce, one package for six people. One day, my hippy brother
moved back home from his naked commune in Santa Barbara, and took over the
cooking. He made black bean burritos with grated carrots, caramelized onions,
sour cream and avocado; fruit salad aptly called “ambrosia”; gazpacho; and
carob brownies. He brewed coffee instead of making instant.
Food
is a packed symbol: an apple, a cup of coffee, meat loaf, a bottle of wine. Physical
hunger is a metaphor for other kinds of hunger (soul hunger, heart hunger). Our
characters are driven by desire, or they may not have a story. What is your character dying for want of? Sometimes, it’s a good meal.
Thank you, Kelly! I also try to include food in my novels. One of the silliest interactions I ever had with a copy editor came up because of food. Todd, my 17 year old, perpetually hungry protagonist in Twelve Days in August, comes home after soccer practice, opens the fridge, and drinks milk straight from the carton. The copy editor circled that scene in red. "Ew! What sort of kid does that?" she queried. Kids like mine, I thought. I called my editor. "Surely this woman has no children," I said. My editor laughed . "You're right," she said. "Just ignore her." I did.
ReplyDeleteMy brothers used to do that all the time, Liza. I remember one of them standing in the light of the fridge downing a half gallon of chocolate milk, much to my despair!
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